tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1685190319540999274.post5622679439650361725..comments2022-12-12T06:43:09.839-08:00Comments on Jandreau28: Complete Cause EssayJandreauhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00840817787743984714noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1685190319540999274.post-82801135748245130592011-09-29T04:02:37.561-07:002011-09-29T04:02:37.561-07:00I don't see either of your intros here in any ...I don't see either of your intros here in any form or your outro either--in fact, there are only two paragraphs instead of five. So, what's going on?<br /><br />I don't know what to tell you at this point, amanda. This reads more like part of your isearch than your cause essay. I don't know how to clear away the confusion you seem to have about this--we could meet at school if you want to talk about what's going on or continue to email back and forth, but this essay is not ready for grading.<br /><br />Take a look again at the sample cause essays: five paragraphs--intro, outro, three reasons for something, one reason per graf in grafs 2/3/4.johngoldfinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09322562737172405323noreply@blogger.com