tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1685190319540999274.post6614868380146696757..comments2022-12-12T06:43:09.839-08:00Comments on Jandreau28: Intro Graf # 2Jandreauhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00840817787743984714noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1685190319540999274.post-28726981268382705062011-09-22T08:13:53.787-07:002011-09-22T08:13:53.787-07:00This works as the second half of a cause essay int...This works as the second half of a cause essay introduction, but the first half is missing--you have to hook the reader and find a way to start that is not simply a preview. The first graf has to stand on its own as a piece of writing, not just as a lead-in to the rest of the paper. Maybe you could start by describing another wedding and its colors? Or an argument about your colors? Your sister's wedding?johngoldfinenoreply@blogger.com