Ever had a place you could go when something was bothering you or you just need to be alone for awhile? I do, it’s a place where no one else knows about. It’s nothing special; it’s just a little rock by the river. But it’s a place where I can go that’s quite. The good part is that where it’s by the river I can take a fishing pole and go fishing whenever I want. The only bad thing is that I have to walk about a mile to get there, and it’s not somewhere you can go during the winter.
"...by the river. But it’s a place...."
ReplyDeleteMaybe right between those two sentences, a little physical description and detail of the surroundings and landscape would have been useful.