Monday, December 5, 2011

Essay 10 Re-Write

Ever watched how people treat their dogs?  I have seen how many people have treated their dogs and it disgust me.  I have seen people that decided they needed dogs just to say they have a dog and when no one is around they ignore it. I have also seen people that have gotten dogs to just leave them home all day long.  What disgust me the most is when people get dogs and can’t afford them.  Dogs are a big responsibility and even though they don’t talk and can’t tell people that there not being taken care of when they need help they still need to be taken care of. 
                There are a lot of people that have dogs that ignore them that leave them tied outside all the time even in bad weather.  There is no reason why a dog, or any animal that should be left out side in the cold weather.  I knew a couple that had two dogs that left their dog outside all year long and never brought them inside.  Just thinking about it makes me disgusted and sick to my stomach.
                 Another thing that disgusts me is when people decided to get dogs when they work all the time and leave them in a cage all day when they’re gone.   Don’t get me wrong I think it’s ok to train you dog in a cage but don’t think they should be put in a cage all day everyday well people are gone and wonder why there bad when hyper when they get out of the cage.  Dogs have energy that they can’t get rid of when sitting in a cage all day. 
                The thing that disgusts me the most is when people get dogs and can’t afford them.   A dog has needs like a person.  They need to be fed and groomed at least once every two months.  They have to be licensed, neutered and have shots that all add up and can be quite expensive.  Along with all the unexpected emergencies that could happen.   There are a lot of people out there that let their dogs suffer with an illness because they can’t afford to take them to the vet. 
                Maybe it’s just me that get’s disgusted watching people treat their dogs bad.  I’m a dog lover and always will be.  I have had dogs in myself ever since I was four and maybe that’s why I hate seeing them treated badly.   Don’t get me wrong though it’s not just dogs no animal should be treated badly.  I wish I could save every dog that is not treated well but you and I both know that’s not possible.  Treat my dog like he’s my child, I buy him treats and toys all the time. I take him everywhere with me and never leave him home.  


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