Wednesday, September 21, 2011

Intro Graf # 2

Three reasons why I chose my wedding colors are first of all orange is my favorite color.  The second reason I chose it was because it matches the colors of the leaves when they start changing and we have leaves for the runner.   Another reason is because my sister got married 28 days before me and she also had orange as one of her wedding colors and we are able to share some of the wedding decorations. 

1 comment:

  1. This works as the second half of a cause essay introduction, but the first half is missing--you have to hook the reader and find a way to start that is not simply a preview. The first graf has to stand on its own as a piece of writing, not just as a lead-in to the rest of the paper. Maybe you could start by describing another wedding and its colors? Or an argument about your colors? Your sister's wedding?